July 24, 2009

Top This

Filed under: Advertising, Concept Creator, Writing — Wolf Tinker @ 2:34 pm

Another ad idea gone to oblivion…

Sadly, I never entered this contest by a major ketchup manufacturer. But I had the greatest idea: in my little clip, images flash on the screen of things on which ketchup can be put (i know its bad grammar but i am tired and haven’t had good sleep).
In the background there are also flashing the other products of the company, and the voice over is saying: top this, taste that, spread this, eat that, spice this, bite that, splash this, love that and so on for all their products.

I’m sure it would have been a winner. I’m getting hungry just thinking about it.

Treadmill Dancing (you saw it here first)

Filed under: Advertising, Concept Creator, Dancing, Ideas — Wolf Tinker @ 2:28 pm

Treadmill dancing was an idea I came up with while walking in time to music on the treadmill at the gym. The faster the music, the faster I would go, and thus succeeded in exceeding previous limits. I thought about how clubs have those bulls that you can ride, and those things that tell you where to step while dancing. Long ago and far away there was a television program called the Flip Wilson show, which actually caught my attention one night when they had a man who could type a readable text in time to music.
All of those ideas did the atom smash in my head and voila (not wella or volla): treadmill dancing. Basically the music plays, the treadmill moves, and you dance on it while it’s moving. You are judged on the speed and incline of the treadmill (there can be classes that are variable both or one or the other) as well as your ability to dance in time with the music.
A dangerous sport, but so is bungee jumping off incredibly high bridges, and you can’t do that at the club…

July 7, 2009

Tinker Ad Agency

Filed under: Advertising — Wolf Tinker @ 3:15 pm

BTW, Jack Tinker was head of one of the most creative ad agencies in history. And I need a place to put all my ad ideas, so here they go. This one is for Dana Farber or any other cancer treatment center:

Start by flashing faces of “ordinary people” and their cancer diagnosis in caption, and the voice over is saying “Cancer isn’t a death sentence anymore” Then have live people saying, “I choose life,” and show them doing things like running races and other sports, also things like family stuff: playing with children and such, and then finally work stuff like working at a computer or a construction job. Last, a voice over with contact information on the screen for donations: “Help us help them.”

It won’t fly since people only get excited about threat of death, but it’s a nice ad nonetheless. Of course if I wanted to do something like that I would just reverse it and have the people at the beginning saying I choose life, then the voice over would say, cancer shouldn’t get in the way, and finally a series of tombstones and then the voiceover, help us help them. Death scares people into charity. What a world.

April 25, 2009

Oh, oh, oh!

Filed under: Uncategorized — Wolf Tinker @ 10:54 am

Someone else in the world with a dislike of word manglers!

Quick, go here: Meebo Blog

My recently developed dislike for meebo (rrr, inserting ads into the IM window, that’s just low) doesn’t prevent me from using it as i have not found a good alternative. usually i automatically click the “X” on the blog when i sign in, but the word “strategery” caught my hypervigilant and easily offended spelling eye.

Kudos to people who resent the killing of the English language. It may be illogical and hard to learn, but it’s what we have.

February 17, 2009

Language and Culture Fantasy Writing Workshop: YrQ and MyA

Filed under: Uncategorized — Tags: , , , — Wolf Tinker @ 4:16 pm

I reproduced the questions in their entirety for reference – I hope that is OK.

Cue the cheesy grin 😀 At this point I find it necessary to tell you how I develop words, and I will give examples below.

1. Typos. I collect them and depending on how they sound (and sometimes how they appear) I make them into characters or places or things.

2. Words from other languages – I take translations of things from into languages and alter them (hence the name of my blog Altered) to suit my needs. For example, the word kifu is related to a swahili word for box. Why swahili? It is a language with which I have some familiarity AND there is a dictionary on the internet. Other invented words have come from Japanese, Arabic, Gaelic, Cherokee, and Navajo.

3. Combinations of words. When Pyraxis and I started working together, I took the means of recorded communication in her world and mine and put them together to make the central figure for the crossroads city. On Karn, history is recorded on tapestries. On Ua, history is recorded on stones added to a monolith in Rabu City. Hence, Tapolith, the setting for the beginning of the story. Tapolith is home to a library set in a monolith, wherein are recorded and kept the histories and artifacts of the many cultures that have applied to be recognized by the library guild (but that, my friend, is another story).

😛 Keep those in mind as you read on.

1. Premise
I think of premise as the basic set of assumptions that a reader needs to accept in order for a story to work. For any story (like mine, for example) that has aliens in it, the existence of some kind of alien language forms a critical part of the premise. The story itself may or may not depend on the nature of this language, but if the language sticks out as unrealistic or somehow physically or culturally impossible, that will make it difficult for readers to accept any kind of story placed in that context.

I am working backwards here. My story started out as a question and a challenge. The question was what would life be life if everyone was a djinn? The challenge was to create a social and political system for another friend to play with. I had never done this before. All my stories were set in democracies that mimicked the one in the US. Clearly if I was to create something different, then I would be creating a different culture. I decided to synthesize. This issue is quite important to me as I have become attached to Ua and want to know if its premise is at all believable. Do you buy the djinn and their culture?

2. Plot
This is “what happens” in the story. Language and culture influence the plot of a story if the story is specifically about language difficulty, or if language difficulty or cultural misunderstanding cause a distinct change in events at any point in the story. My own stories involve this stuff all the time.

There are some major cultural violations in our story – Ualin does not believe in the idea of darklessness, a central concept to Ua philosophy. More accurately, she does not believe that taking a life necessarily makes her darkless. This will be a big issue because if she refuses the healing ritual of the dark she could lose her right to be Raba. This is enforced by the only thing more powerful than a Raba – a council of Ua trained to defeat a Raba if the need arose. Other conflicts: A Raba is supposed to ask kifu duty of only a few sons, and let them out after 40 years (there is a good reason for 40 years). The Raba’s house, or masta (directly from swahili), is supposed to own one or two kifu, the purpose of which is to enhance the Raba’s power when an emergency arises. Under the guise of seeking to solve the water problem, masta Ua has collected no less than 12 kifu. The people are upset, but conflicted – Ualin’s house has given help to many a refugee, and it looks like she is the only one actively working on the problem instead of waiting around for the prophecy to come true. I say collected, because of the 12, only 7 remain in Ualin’s actual custody. We learn about those in the story, and we meet two of the inhabitants, on the run from Ualin because she has learned that they actually escaped from their boxes – a violation Ualin looks on with disfavor. More conflict comes in when Ualin leaves Ua to chase them – there is some consideration of what the people think of a Raba who goes off chasing kifu escapees when she should be on Ua trying to solve the problem of the drought, especially when already she has too many kifu.

3. Setting
In this case I’m not talking about the physical setting, but the cultural and linguistic setting. This is something that I believe is applicable to every story. Quite often it’s done well on gut feel alone, without any kind of analysis. Look for any way in which the people in your story are divided into types, and there you’ll find a great opportunity to explore language and culture. This doesn’t just mean how the different groups speak. It also means how they are described by others, and how they describe others; what expectations are held for them and how those expectations are explained; how their role and values are judged. So in this area everyone can dig in; one of the things that can help you to do that is character.

Sigh. Not just the three families. By mid-story, there are five cultures mingling: Karn and Ua, and to a lesser extent Beren and Saskha, and least but relatively significant, Qoroq. Fiona gets into trouble in Tapolith because she doesn’t know their ways (though we might cut that bit). She’s already gotten into trouble on Saskha because she didn’t know *their* ways. And she’s on trouble on Karn for *purposely* violating their ways. Qoroq is important because the fellow from there (Tarks, typo for talks) gets turned on his head with respect to culture. He is from a highly militarized culture (no relationship is good relationship) and the first thing that happens is he gets attracted to Fiona. Next he violates his oath to protect Sha from capture. The other characters don’t know it, but he is there to kill Sha if necessary to prevent his capture. But while they are running from Ualin, he becomes a father figure to Sha and trains him to hunt, developing an emotional connection that is a clear violation of his oath.

This area needs thought because M’Gy and Puma are from Ua and should be aghast at the killings that take place around them. They are not sufficiently outraged or traumatized, and they do nothing to stop the killings. Yet both are djinn, and they could do something. By contrast Ualin, when she arrives on Karn, has no conflict with this and she runs into a character whose merciless use of humans and other life forms should make her pleased to be its ally (that’s right, I said and meant *its*). Gotta fix that. P, you listening?

4. Character
A character is a wonderful tool for language and culture building in part because of point of view. If you want to learn about how some group of people regards the others around it, experiment with writing the answers to a set of questions from the point of view of one of the members of that group. Trying to take a point of view often makes it easier to explore the answers to language and culture questions, and value judgment questions. How does your character talk about people he or she respects? Hates? Every character has a personal history, and a personal culture (even aliens or fantasy characters without a known group from our world); these things influence character behavior and judgment in every circumstance.

Um. Guilty of lack of internal POV….

5. Dialogue
By dialogue I mean how your characters talk. Do you want them to speak in British dialect? Should they speak with an accent that is indicated by alternate spellings of known words? Do they use a lot of slang? If you consider that they are speaking a foreign (usually their own) language, do you want to have that reflected at all in the way their English dialogue is written? If they’re communicating on a channel that isn’t auditory, such as empathic or telepathic or pheremonal signals, what information are they conveying by that means and how do you want to express that in English?

Telepathy usually is indicated by parentheses. However, the vocal language is sung rather than spoken. Although this is not as evident in the first book, Ualin (Lin) is making changes based on her experience off-sphere. She sometimes talks without singing and she uses talking aloud to make conversations more confidential. However the rest of the people speak by singing and it makes sense to me that they would be more used to telepathic communication than singing. That means for characters who have not spent much time off Ua, even singing might be difficult or even grate on the nerves. This indeed would make for interesting interactions, as AzRa has not been off Ua very much, yet her house is responsible for providing musicians for the other houses. And I had not even considered that some of the music might should be telepathic in nature. What would that look like? I’m thinking…

6. Voice
This one means narrator voice – the language of the voice telling the story. Whether you’ve got a story told in first or third person, the narrator has an identity, and that identity is indicated by the words you use to tell the story. The narrator can be an epic storyteller, or one of the characters considering his or life retrospectively, or one of the characters experiencing the story in the moment; as a character (invisible or no), the narrator has his or her own culture that is reflected in language. This element can be tricky to step back from and work with, but if you ever really want to go whole hog with an alien point of view, for example, it can be invaluable.

This is something I’ve worked with in other things I’ve written as I’ve an issue with stories where all the characters sound like the author even if their internal dialogue is written differently. It’s the reason I am very picky about what I read. I lose my willing suspension of disbelief if everyone sounds the same. I may decide to develop this further as I have not worked much with what another world seems like to a djinn. This may be important (if we have room) to develop in our 4 year old djinn who emerges from his kifu on Beren Gan (Beren is the name of the world and Gan means world in that place).

Um, I probably didn’t mention it, but I have a BA in Writing and though it was long ago, I still have some bits of jargon sticking to me *brushes furiously at side of pants leg* so I hope you will forgive that.

February 11, 2009

Communication, Protocol and Dialect on Ua

Filed under: Uncategorized — Tags: , — Wolf Tinker @ 5:06 pm

I can see that I am going to have to explain a lot, but this post is a detailed answer to the question on TalkToYoUniverse regarding language on Ua.

I will explain that Ua refers to the entire sphere, as well as to the people there (the Ua, or Ua). The founder of masta Ua was quite arrogant and named her house after the people, confusing things at least a little. To reduce the confusion, masta Ua is always referred to as masta Ua and the people as “the Ua.” The word for people is used without the “the.”

Here’s the questions: You say the three houses, Az, Uz, and Ua, are separate and concerned with different things, and they have dialectal differences but not major language differences. I wonder how, and how often, the three houses interact with one another. This would be a factor in evening out language differences. Since they’ve obviously been around for a long time, I could see that there might be dialectal distinctions between the groups. Can you think of a way to make the language use reflect the main concern of the house? I should remark that dialectal differences can be rather large, and if you want there to be dialect differences, you should probably think of how you’d like to mark them in your English text. Also, if Ua is a “newer” house, then its dialect might resemble one of the others (say, Az) more closely than the two others do (making Uz and Ua dialects more similar to each other than to Az). Do you have any immediate thoughts on this?

My Answer:

Geographically, Az is closest to Rabu City, where the Rabu lives. Uz is next closest, and Ua lies across a desert (once a sea) from Uz, making it the most remote. The story deals very little with Az and Uz except at the end. The house of Ua gained its designation via it’s Raba’s relationship with the Rabu of that time. Of course, someone had to be ousted from that position, and the consort at that time was the Raba of Az. So there is some ill feeling toward the house of Ua from Az. Unfortunately the Raba chose to withdraw from her high profile position and the influence of the house of Az was significantly reduced, an event from which they never have recovered. I have not developed the language beyond communication related to the events of the story, so while there are words for colors, numbers, magic and magical events, there are not words to illustrate the cultural and dialect differences.

Each house has a council and each house must send its Raba or most often her representative to the other’s council meetings (this task usually falls to the Raba’s mate as the meetings are incredibly long and horribly boring – see protocol example below and imagine that for a 12 person meeting). Uz and Ua often come together for census time (as this is a celebration) and for councils to address shared concerns as their lands border. Uz extends an always open invitation to Az, but it has not been answered in years. Most people on Ua believe the house of Az to be impotent and useless (disproven at the end of the story in a most dramatic way).

The people of the various ruling houses tend to imitate their leaders. Tensions are high between the lands because the house of Ua has the most water. Refugees from other lands are sneaking in all the time. Not only this but at the time of the story, there is tension between Uz and Ua because of the behavior of the young leader of Ua, a woman who eschews protocol and doesn’t believe in the prophecy about the return of the water. Raba UzJef is old enough to be Raba Ualin’s mother (who vanished under suspicious circumstances when Ualin was only 13). To make matter’s worse, Ualin has adopted UzJef’s daughter into the house of Ua, and made her the second in command, her Anza. Basically this means less contact between these two houses royal families, but some mixing among the common people, who have investment in appearing to be from masta Ua. In the past, interaction between the various houses took place via trade or special events called gatherdays.

But the tensions are a recent development, so the main differences tend to be more how language is used rather than specific word differences. Ualin tends to speak aloud more often as this is more secure than telepathy. The words on Ua are all sung, and so when I talk about dialect differences I am actually referring to differences in tone and key. So if I say that the dialect of the house of Az is more colorful, does that help? By that I mean more melodic. The house of Uz tends to be more like chanting, and the house of Ua tends to be a little spartan, especially since Ualin has taken the sagama. She has even learned to speak without singing! She’s been offworld more than any other Raba, and since the people tend to imitate their leader, changes are taking place in the language of Ua. Telepathic communication tends to wash away differences related to sound, so when I talk about differences in that respect, it has more to do with protocol and actually partly explains the importance of protocol. The house of Az is careless about protocol except in the presence of the Rabu, the house of Uz tends to use it most, and at masta Ua, they are likely to observe it for the first few exchanges of an interaction and then drop it by mutual agreement. A practical example:

Ualin and Uaben (one of Ualin’s husbands) in a telepathic conversation. Note that channels are set up by the use of wards by individuals to limit who can hear the conversation. Raba are taught to set up sophisticated wards, and two Raba can set up a channel that is extremely difficult to eavesdrop. Part of the protocol is that the Raba always initiates the contact. If they are in a public/group situation, a “caller” is assigned to the most important people so that they don’t have to keep singing their signature over and over again.

Lin: (reads Ben’s telepathic signature (basically his pedigree/names) and offers hers)

Ben: (reads Lin’s telepathic signature and offers his)

Lin: (asks whether to use private or Raba channel (only the Raba, other Raba and her family can use this) )

Ben: (chooses private channel)

Lin: (asks to drop protocol)

Ben: (agrees)

this, by the way, isn’t the best idea as Ben shouldn’t be trusted…

Here is the beginning of a conversation with a Raba with full protocol. The “bead” is the essence of a person; you might compare it to our DNA. In Ua, the bead is like an onion. Each layer has unique colors and textures based on the person’s innate characteristics and formative experiences. Ua often carry a real bead on their person to record important events of their lives; this can be used to heal them if something happens to their minds. Um. I didn’t say this, but they have no written language. They “write” by recording images and thought into “weaving stones” or beads. Anyone who picks up a bead or weaving stone can read it unless it is warded for privacy. In rabu city there is a monolith of weaving stones recording the history of Ua. Conveniently, the one with the prophecy is missing – broken into pieces, several of which have been found.

UzJef and UzMaled (one of her lieutenants who is searching for fragments of the prophecy stone and for ways to fulfill the prophecy to return the water)

UzMaled enters UzJef’s presence (announced by a servant, of course) and waits. He has let down his basic wards already in deference to the Raba.

Jef: (reads Maled’s telepathic signature (basically his pedigree/names) and offers hers)

Maled: (reads Jef’s telepathic signature and offers his)

Jef: (asks whether to use private or public channel)

Maled: (chooses private channel, says, Raba Jef (repeats her signature), I am open to you)

Jef: (asks if she can probe his mind)

Maled; (grants permission to (Jef’s signature) to probe him) [this actually is safety; he has put himself into a state of mind wherein he will recognize and repel anyone without Jef’s unique signature]

Jef: (apologizes to (Maled’s signature) for the intrusion and offers uza to help him recover from the probe)

Maled: (accepts the uza and exposes his (internal) bead)

Jef: (probes his mind leaving the bead untouched, finds no malice or traps. Grants permission to proceed with the conversation, thanks Maled for being open to her)

Maled: (thanks Jef for “trusting” him, begins his report)
I think the telepathic language does reflect the concerns of the houses. Not as sure about the spoken (sung) language. I hope the explanation above answers the question about the resemblance of the “dialects.”

February 10, 2009

Filed under: Uncategorized — Tags: , — Wolf Tinker @ 4:28 pm

I found a wonderful new blog, courtesy of Pyraxis, my partner. It is all about linguistics and anthropology. It’s called TalkToYoUniverse. Now I will have fancy names for all the things I do to play with words. My hope is that I will get better at it. The woman who writes it is holding a workshop for people who write fiction that incorporates language and culture.

It will be interesting to see what she thinks of my worlds – I have several, including a quasi-fictional earth. They are all connected by a place with gates that open to each world. The crossroads world connects all of mine with Pyraxis’ two and with Dirt, which is their name for Earth. Its fun to go play there. And its a great distraction while I wait for my favorite authors to publish something else for me to devour.

Meanwhile, I am going to experiment with making this blog into my secretary – actually not this one, because I’ve decided to use it for what it says – altered things. Currently I am working on a rsakk battle song – based on a hannukah song by Peter Paul and Mary called “Don’t Let the Light Go Out”

Requests taken, btw.

February 7, 2009


Filed under: Uncategorized — Tags: — Wolf Tinker @ 9:07 am

My pageviews went up from nothing to four. I’m scared. My stomach hurts. *Crawls back into the dark to hide*

January 16, 2009

What’s the Idea?

Filed under: Uncategorized — Wolf Tinker @ 6:44 am


This is my very own private journal. Since I don’t know how to get traffic, I get to be private. That’s good, that’s bad. So herein I will rant all my lovely ideas about the internet and how to use it for me.

First of all, if I am not in academia publishing, then I should be publishing here. That way people can find me and comment on my work and share ideas with me in a pseudoacademic environment (alas, which one isn’t?). So I need blogs in all my areas of interest: psychology and subsets thereof, and computers and subsets thereof. On my less professional sites I can wax poetic about Christmas and ballpoint pens.

So, I will use this blog to organize and manage the others. I should start with the psychology blog since I still want to find a teaching job. I should start with my philosophy of education. Or of teaching. I am not sure how to distinguish between the two. Also I should have some sort of online resume which includes links to fun and useful things like my Asperger’s information site, Was that a shameless plug or a bookmark? I will figure out how to get that link where it belongs.

I could use wordpress and Knol to do the professional blogs. Two sites is more than enough for me to handle. I need a place for my  unofficial theorizing – not sure where to put those – maybe another blog here.

That’s it for now. Another thing I am doing is not spending all my time in one place, so I have to move on to my next activity, either painting or some brain building thing. Or writing. I can’t forget Water Song. Don’t want my kin to get discouraged, though right now she’s got something she’s interested in. Yikes. It still looks like a lot, especially since now I realise I have forgotten things that I have yet to remember. Sigh.

December 22, 2008

National Haiku Day

Filed under: Poetry, Writing — Tags: , , — Wolf Tinker @ 5:04 am

Pitch dark lingers deep
in the soul of the silence
snow falls, lights burn bright

burn log, light, candle!
greet the coming of the day
shadows, comfort me.


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